Extra information

Following my writing group’s work on adding extra information into sentences using brackets, hyphens and commas, I thought I’d set you a little challenge to write your own sentences. In case you aren’t in my group, I’m looking for ideas like these:
Mole scuttled through the Wild Wood (which was filled with eerie noises) as fast as he could.
Queen Victoria held a party – for the Royal Family – to celebrate her Diamond Jubilee.
Isambard Kingdom Brunel, who was educated in France, designed several famous ships during the Victorian era.

Raffle tickets to all who respond correctly…

12 thoughts on “Extra information

  1. Wiktoria was eating buns and then she got dirty.
    Wiktoria was eating buns (which were yummy) and then she got dirty.
    Wiktoria was eating buns, which were yummy, and then she got dirty.

    1. Thanks girls. I’ve published the ones that used the punctuation correctly πŸ˜‰ rewards for you tomorrow!

  2. Queen Victoria’s husband,who was named Albert, died of typhoid aged 42.
    The great exhibition-which was held in Hyde park-attracted people from all over the country.

  3. Eve was eating an apple but she dropped it
    Eve was eating an apple (which was very big) but she dropped it
    Eve was eating an apple, which was very big, but she dropped it

  4. Sienna was enjoying an orange but it squirted her in the eye .
    Sienna was enjoying an orange (which was very juicy)but it squirted her in the eye.
    Sienna was enjoying an orange, which was very juicy, but it squirted her in the eye.

    1. Hey Jaydn, great to see you blogging πŸ™‚ Thanks for the sentences – I’ll put a signature on for you tomorrow

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